Ok, looks good. Get out there and film it!
I do have one suggestion after looking at it again....I think the wording at the start where one friend says, "Look what I found!" needs to be changed. They are in a store and you don't really "find" things there. When I hear, "Look what I found!" I think more along the lines of that person found something on the ground or something. Maybe it could be more like, "Hey, check this out!" instead. Think about it.
This Quarter, I'll be working by myself on a Public Service Announcement.