We talked about this already in class but here is a recap. Your audio needs to be bumped up. I have it at the max on my computer and it's still low so make that adjustment on your timeline. We talked about the length of your string in your opening shots and how they are not tied off. You need to have photos or video of what the drums look like when used as a decoration on a gift. Your car keys photo also needs to be redone. Overall the opening should show me video of the drums being played with a cut in of the sticks hitting the drum. Think of a sequence as that's what's missing. Your timing also needs to be better when showing the shots to match the script better. We talked about using more video instead of still photos, like showing a video of the tape, with each other color being added to the shot for one shot of video instead of three still shots of each color separately. I'd also like to see you build the drum in one shot using a shorter piece of black tape. Your tape seems too long so you've cut the clip to make it go by faster but you also cut out the creation of the drum. Show me exactly what to do in one continuous clip. We also talked about how you missed the step of putting on the string in your video. That needs to be added. The closeup shot of Ty's face was excellent. That is what that sequence needs to look like. Great job there! I also don't want to see the same shots appear at the end like that. Let's get better shots of what the drum looks like when used for those things. This is getting better but it still needs some work. When will the next rough cut be posted?
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